Posted by: Author | August 7, 2023

Tuesday Tales- August 8, 2023- Wood

This week the writers of Tuesday Tales are writing to the word prompt, wood. I am in the midst of edits on my fall release so I started on a new story at lunch today (Aug 7) to get something up for the week. This is going to be a Halloween story. Or I think it is. LOL

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My friends and I stood outside the remains of the Andry Plantation near the Mississippi River and west of New Orleans, Louisiana. This was the site of a slave uprising in 1811 and we were here to stay overnight on a dare. My friend, Jacques, is a professor at Tulane as well as a descendant of one of the slaves who was part of the revolt. They’d planned to march to New Orleans and start an independent republic for their people.

Ultimately, they were unsuccessful and captured or killed.

At the university, Jacques met the people who’d recently purchased the property to restore and, in the course of his discussion with them about how they would restore the plantation while also being sensitive to the historical context, they had extended him an invitation to come stay.

Upon being informed about certain eerie occurrences, Jacques decided he didn’t want to come alone so he invited me and another friend, Monty. Or, truth be known, he dared us to come. Double-dog dared even.

The three of us stood at the bottom of the short stairs leading to the porch. “Who’s going first?” Monte asked.

I studied the wood floor of the porch. It had more holes than it had planks. “I’ll lead the way but be careful. I worry about the state of that veranda. One wrong step, and your leg will go in one of those holes. We sure don’t want any broken bones.” I paused. “It concerns me about the inside of the house, too. I mean, if the porch is this bad, what’s the interior like?”

“I’ve been assured that the two drawing rooms are in excellent shape. At least the floors are. They’ve already been restored.” Jacques nodded. “Besides, the outside will be less pristine as it’s been exposed to the elements more than the inside.”

Monty looked up at the roof. “Some of it anyway. Looks like some natural air conditioning there in some spots.”

An eerie howl in the woods startled us all. My heart rate increased noticeably. “Whatever that is, I don’t want to be out here waiting for it to come claim me.”

“Nonsense. It’s probably just a panther,” Monty said.

Just a panther?” Jacques asked. “That’s bad enough.”

The sound came again. Closer this time.

It was too dark out here for my comfort even with the half-moon hanging over the house. “Let’s get inside.”

“What happened to being worried about holes in the floor?” Jacques asked.

“The known is safer than the unknown.”


Responses

  1. Susanne Matthews's avatar

    I got goosebumps reading that. Great scene.

    • Author's avatar

      Aww. Thanks! ❤

  2. Vicki Locey's avatar

    Great snippet!

    • Author's avatar

      Thanks

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  3. Jean Joachim's avatar

    Love the description of the place. And, yes, I’d be concerned about the inside floor, too. The howl? Gives me the creeps. Could be a coyote, too. But a panther? Yikes!! Open that door! Great episode.

    • Author's avatar

      thanks, Jean! We have panthers down here and they have a very distinctive howl. Creep-tastic!

  4. Tricia's avatar

    Ooooh, spooky! I love the intro to this story and how concern of a broken leg quickly faded to the fear of being eaten. Great job!

    • Author's avatar

      LOL! All fear is relative, right?!? LOL

  5. Flossie Benton Rogers's avatar

    You always amaze me how you can start a new story off the bat, plunge right in, and finish it in “no time.” I hope it does turn out to be a Halloween story. It’s spooky so far! I hope the double dog dare doesn’t get them in trouble with a panther or ghostie.

    • Author's avatar

      thanks Flossie. I told my paralegal I had nothing to write for TT this week and was going to try to make something up at lunch that day. She said, “Isn’t all writing making stuff up?” LOL! I was inspired on this one by a show I had watched on the Louisiana slave uprising last week. The swamp and the old plantation house were creepy. I’ve been over to those plantations before and some are really derelict– as it should be in my opinion. Places of much suffering.

    • Author's avatar

      and thanks for saying it’s already spooky! I’m glad! LOL

  6. trishafaye's avatar

    OH! Fun new story snippet to put us all in a different mood. The spooky panther getting closer helps with that!
    Great snippet.

    • Author's avatar

      thanks TrishaFaye! I love me some spooky!


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