Posted by: Author | September 25, 2023

Tuesday Tales- September 26, 2023- sweet

This week, the writer’s of Tuesday Tales are writing to the word prompt sweet. I am still working on my spooky story. It’s slow going with all the stuff happening in my life so we’re picking up right where we left off last week.

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I finessed my way up the first five stairs as Jacques waited at the landing for me.

On the sixth step, I heard a big crack and leapt to the seventh just in time to watch a big gap crater in where I’d just been standing. “Jiminy Cricket. I almost had a major problem there.” How we were going to get back down without wiping out was going to be my next question but Jacques laughter stopped me from asking it.

“Boy, those were some sweet moves there, Annika. That little jig you did to get yourself off that stair was worthy of a spot on Dancing with the Stars.” He tapped the newel post. “Hurry up and get up here. I want to see if we can find the part of the house where the master’s son, Gilbert, was murdered with the axe.”

“I thought that happened on the first floor?”

“I’ve read a number of accounts of the incident and some say the ground floor, some say the top floor and some even call it as happening in the yard. I thought we’d take a look around and see how easy it would have been for the slaves involved in the revolt to negotiate their way to the top floor and where they might have found the son. Like a bedroom or something.”

“Well, I can attest it would have probably been easier in 1811 to get up those stairs. Surely there weren’t decayed and rotten steps back then.”

“Very funny. Of course, even if the stairs were in pristine condition, they would have had a hard time coming in the house and getting up here. They were field hands and probably didn’t know their way around the plantation house interior very well. One would presume so anyway.”

“I’m sure they had allies in the house slaves who would direct them to the right room since they outnumbered the white owners by a large number.”

“One thing we don’t know is how afraid the house slaves would have been to assist in case it all went wrong. The punishments were severe for sure.”

“I’ve read that many were executed when the revolt was over. What a horrible time period of history. I feel for the people who were so desperate to get out of their circumstances that they took a stand and then lost their lives because of that stand.” I moved carefully up the next few stairs. As I arrived at the landing, another huge boom of thunder echoed through the house, making me jump and let out a squeal. I lost my balance and teetered backward, my hand grasping air instead of the banister.


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  1. Susanne Matthews's avatar

    Oh my! What a cliffhanger. Those were cruel and vicious times for sure. Sadly, there are still people who judge others by the color of their skin and make their lives miserable. Great post.

    • Author's avatar

      It is terrible, isn’t it? Upsets me so much. People are people! Always!

      • Susanne Matthews's avatar

        WE aren’t perfect up here and how our own issues with treating blacks and Chinese unfairly, but it’s always seemed so much worse in your neck of the woods.

      • Author's avatar

        Sadly, you’re right. We have some really ignorant people in my neck of the woods. I am sure not proud of that.

  2. Flossie Benton Rogers's avatar

    Oh my gosh– that ending! That is definitely not a safe location. Love how he describes her little jig as she previously avoided disaster.

    • Author's avatar

      Thanks! I wish I knew where this was going…. LOL

  3. Jean Joachim's avatar

    OMG! You’re leaving us THERE?? Are we having a contest for the most heart-stopping cliffhanger? Because if we are, this one takes my vote. Geez Louise. Amazing story. Ghosty and scary. The history of our mistreatment of Blacks in this country is incredibly shameful. I’m loving your story though. Can’t wait to find out what happens next.

    • Author's avatar

      LOL Re: Cliffhanger winner. LOL! And yes, it is def shameful how Blacks have been treated.

  4. Tricia's avatar

    Oh no! What happens to her? I love the little bit of history that you added to this. Great job!

    • Author's avatar

      thanks Tricia. The history of that slave revolt was my inspiration for the tale


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