Posted by: Author | October 30, 2023

Tuesday Tales- October 31, 2023- Scary

This week, the writers of Tuesday Tales are writing to the word prompt scary. Happy Halloween!!

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I moved toward Jacques’ voice wondering what had him sounding so freaked out.

When I turned the corner, I saw him kneeling down with his hand on the floor.

Since it was still so dark, I couldn’t really tell what he was doing. “What’s happening? Where’s Monte?” I asked.

Jacques looked up at me, his face white enough for me to see in the dim light. He appeared to be shell-shocked. Or at least how I pictured someone who suffered from that as looking.

“He’s not here. Gone.”

“Gone where?”

Jacques shrugged. “No clue but there appears to be a puddle of blood here.  Come see.”

This was scary. “What do you mean blood? Are you touching it?” Horror seized me by the throat. I couldn’t swallow. “What is happening?” I took a step back. Not sure I wanted to go forward at all.

“I touched it to see what it was. It’s thick like blood or like melted chocolate. It’s hard to tell exactly what it is in the dark, but is smells metallic and not like cocoa.” Jacques held his hand out. “Come over here and check it out.”

“Shouldn’t we be calling the police? If Monte is hurt and missing, we need assistance in finding him and getting him some help.” A thought seized hold of my brain. “I saw a huge shadow outside a few minutes ago. I wonder if that was someone determined to hurt us. It’s pretty deserted in this area. What if some criminal was hiding out here and we disturbed their lair?”

“I don’t think that’s the situation. My friend who arranged for us to be here has a crew working in the house all week. He’d know if there was anyone hanging around. He wouldn’t send us into danger.” Jacques stood, his knees creaking in the silence between us. Eerily, the rain had stopped and a hush spread over the house.

“I don’t like this. We need to call someone to come help us find Monte.” I didn’t want to get near that puddle of blood. It was freaking me out. There was a lot of it and I was sure Monte had to be hurt really badly to have lost so much. This was not what I wanted to have happen this evening. I thought this would be a fun and eventful learning experience about the old plantation. I wasn’t anticipating one of my friends getting injured or disappearing.

“We have to go outside and look for him.” I turned toward the door. “At least it’s stopped raining.”

“I think you’re right about calling the police.” Jacques hesitated. “And probably an ambulance. This doesn’t look good. Nope. Not good at all.”


Responses

  1. Susanne Matthews's avatar

    Goosebumps here! Blood and someone missing in a haunted house? I’m out of there! Great post.

    • Author's avatar

      hahaha. Me, too! I wouldn’t be sticking around either.

  2. Jean Joachim's avatar

    A third cliff-hanger? You guys are really something, leaving me in the air like this three times! A pool of blood. Hell, yeah, I’d be calling the cops and high-tailing it out of there immediately! So what’s going on? Why did it suddenly stop raining? You’re weaving a wonderful tale here. Loving this story.

    • Author's avatar

      Thanks Jean. Glad you’re intrigued. I have to leave it now since it will be NaNo tomorrow and I have to do something new….gives me time to think of what comes next… LOL

  3. Flossie Benton Rogers's avatar

    What is happening at this house? Where is Monte? Your scene is really suspenseful (SCARY) with the blood, huge shadow, and disappearing person.

    • Author's avatar

      thanks Flossie. That means a lot since I admire your work so much!

  4. V.L. Locey's avatar

    EEP! Lots of spooky scary stuff taking place this week. Great snippet!

    • Author's avatar

      Thanks. I love scary.

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  5. Tricia's avatar

    Oh I guessed something happened and now I’m really worried about him. Suspense has me on the edge of my seat! Great job!

    • Author's avatar

      thanks. Will get back to this story after NaNo


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