Yesterday was the monthly meeting of my RWA chapter. After much discussion, it was decided that I needed to rename my heroine. In my book, Solo Honeymoon, my heroine was initially named Tess. I struggled and struggled with the story until I changed her name to Emma. Once she had the “right” name, her character finally came out and I was able to rock on with the story. Several of us in the chapter that car pooled to the meeting decided I should try that tactic with Capri, the heroine in my current WIP, Obsession.
Names were bandied about- some were quite ridiculous (and fun) and some were really good choices. I finally decided on three possibilities: India, Kathryn or Joanna. By the time I got dropped off, I had chosen India and even told Elizabeth that was my choice. I live 2.5 miles from the Publix where we meet to carpool. By the time I got home, it came to me that the heroine’s name is Joanna. Now, I have no idea if that’s true but I’ll see as I continue to write. I’ll see if the flow gets better. So, far as of this evening, she has loosened up a bit. She’s less unlikeable. I mean, I was really starting to think she was an unlikeable person, but I’m already seeing a softer side of her. That’s promising.
I’m also grateful for our chauffeur, Shannon. He’s the spouse of our member/friend, Jamie. He gave me some great info to use with the trauma my hero sustained in his time as a green beret. The info Shannon shared will help me make this story more authentic.
We ate a late lunch at Panera Bread and I got all of 97 words written on our NaNo “sprint.” Not much sprinting there for me. But I did get research done by chatting with Shannon about being deployed to a militarized zone- that counts for something, right?
Don’t forget to visit me here today: http://desertbreezepublishing.blogspot.com/ They’re doing new author spotlights on the weekends and I’m the author du jour.

Sounds like the Pensacola Express is a lot of fun. As to names, that’s what Find and Replace is for. Will visit Desert Breeze. Congrats. RitaVF
By: ritavf on November 7, 2010
at 7:54 am
Thanks Rita.
By: sfcatty on November 7, 2010
at 8:39 am