Posted by: Author | February 7, 2011

This is Going to Sound Really Arrogant

and I don’t mean it to, but I have to share this. I worked yesterday on edits for my romantic suspense story tentatively titled Tormented.  I was stunned at how clean it seemed. I actually only had a few things to add/change. A few typos, some ” marks where they didn’t need to be, some clarification phrases and a section I need to add about 3oo words to flesh out the scene. 

I could very well be delusional and this story may be a total mess and I just think I’m being clever. But, dang, I was pleased with myself and the way it flowed.  Once I send it out into the world, I may find that it really is a piece of crap, but for now, I’m content.

Here’s my inspiration for the hero- Sebastian Hughes:


  1. I’m sure it is a great story, Jillian. Oh, I like your inspiration for your hero. He is gorgeous. 🙂

    • Thanks Ciara. I hope so. Yes, Idris Elba is very handsome- tall and sexy, too!

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