This week’s word is Rough. AND yeah, I’m still on the train story. I decided to move forward with it after all. See the other posts here.
“Look here, Rozzelle, that’s no way to behave with a lady present. Leave her be.” Win took a step forward as if to punch the other man.
Fiona pulled on Win’s arm. “Stop. Let him go by. He’s a waste of time.”
“Speaking of wastes of time, Barrington, I don’t know what you see in this little mouse when you have that nice, vibrant piece in your own compartment. How is the little wife anyway?” Rozzelle kept the smirk firmly in place as he taunted Win.
Win punched Rozzelle in the face. “Shut the hell up.”
Rozzelle shoved Win up against the wall of compartment and held him there by the upper arms. “Don’t you ever touch me again. You’ll more than regret it. You have two ladies on this train you seem to care about and if you make one more move against me, you’ll lose at least one of them if not both.” He shoved back on Win once more and then let go. He turned to Fiona and bowed. “Better keep your boyfriend in line, missy, if you don’t want to lose him.” He spun on his heel and headed toward the dining car.
Fiona, her hands shaking, turned to Win. “Are you all right? He was a bit rough, wasn’t he?”
“I’m fine.” Win pushed his hair off his face and glanced down at Fiona. “He’s messed up your hair. Let’s go back inside and fix it.”
“I can do that. You need to get to the dining car and check on Cordelia since that odious man is going that way. I’m worried about her.”
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I’m still on my Blog tour. Today’s blog is here: Come by and say hello if you get a chance. I’m being interviewed and it was a fun one!
I`m glad to see you`ve decided to carry on with this tale. I like it!
By: Vicki Locey on August 20, 2013
at 5:36 am
Thanks Vicki. I’m in another lull but it’s life getting me dragged down now, not the story. Lol
By: Jillian Chantal on August 20, 2013
at 7:20 am
I’m glad you are on the same TRAIN of thought! And I hope life lightens up for you…us both.
By: Tonette Joyce on August 20, 2013
at 11:37 am
Thanks Tonette. I also hope things lighten up for us!!
By: Jillian Chantal on August 20, 2013
at 11:49 am
I’m glad you’re carrying on with it…I’m so intrigued by what is happening…I can’t wait to read more!
By: Sarah Cass on August 20, 2013
at 11:42 am
Thanks Sarah. I have to get to the next words in the prompt list as I’m caught up after next week.
By: Jillian Chantal on August 20, 2013
at 11:48 am
I don’t like Rozzelle and I’m glad you’re continuing the story
By: Lindsay Downs on August 20, 2013
at 7:30 pm
Thank you, Lindsay. I’m plugging along.
By: Jillian Chantal on August 20, 2013
at 7:36 pm
Good to see you’re continuing the story … bit of friction happening … can’t wait to read more.
By: Iris B on August 20, 2013
at 7:53 pm
Thanks Iris. Lots of friction is hitting the fan now. Lol
By: Jillian Chantal on August 20, 2013
at 8:09 pm
So glad you’re continuing with this story. I hope life lightens up soon as we await the next chapter in this intriguing tale.
By: jean joachim on August 22, 2013
at 5:58 am
Thanks Jean. I hope so, too. My usual stress release is writing but right now, it’s not working. Lol
By: Jillian Chantal on August 22, 2013
at 7:25 am
That odious man???
Absolutely PERFECT! I love the story and love the flair you have.
By: trishafaye on August 23, 2013
at 12:24 am
Thanks Tricia! You made my day!
By: Jillian Chantal on August 23, 2013
at 7:18 am
I’m intrigued to know more.
By: Sherry Gloag on August 23, 2013
at 2:39 pm
Thanks sherry.
By: Jillian Chantal on August 23, 2013
at 7:55 pm
Can’t wait to read more.
By: sellery2010 on August 25, 2013
at 7:07 pm
thanks Stefan
By: Jillian Chantal on August 25, 2013
at 8:04 pm
Thanks Stefan.
By: Jillian Chantal on August 26, 2013
at 4:13 am
Thanks for continuing this story. I really love it! My feelings for Win switch every time I read the next excerpt. I feel like a ping pong ball!
By: Tricia on August 25, 2013
at 10:04 pm
Lol Tricia. Thanks. I’ve not been fair to old Win. I’ve been putting out red herrings on him.
By: Jillian Chantal on August 26, 2013
at 4:10 am