It’s Tuesday Tales day again. I am still in my story set on the train. I’m moving very slowly in this as I am not feeling it. I have picked up where I left off a few weeks ago. The word we are writing to is evil. It’s kind of how I feel about this story- it is kicking my rear.
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“What’s going on, Jane?” Martin asked. “Why are you standing there?”
“I was going to the restroom, but I see someone just went in. I guess I’ll sit back down and wait.”
“There’s another one at the other end of the car. Go use that one.”
What could I do? I couldn’t look like an idiot and insist on not going to one as opposed to the other. Resigned, I turned and trudged toward the one at the back of the car. Dang it, I needed to get a closer look at that guy. It was driving me crazy trying to figure out where I’d seen him before.
Once I was alone in the lavatory, I leaned on the sink and stared at myself. Think, think, think. What was familiar about that lumberjack? What was it?
Giving up, I flushed the toilet—just in case someone was standing outside—Weird quirk of mine.
I opened the door to step out and ran right into the lumberjack. Taking a step back, I looked him in the face. “You. It’s you.”
He winked. “I saw you giving me the stink eye and when you started toward me, I know you were headed to confront me, so I went into the area in front of the facilities.” He shook his head. “Imagine my chagrin when you went the other way.”
“What are you playing at?”
Shrugging, he grinned. “I don’t know what you mean. I’m not playing at anything. I am very seriously doing my job?”
“What kind of job causes you to ride trains in disguise? Something evil, I’m sure.” A thought popped in my head. “Are you a train robber?”
Oh my, talk about a tight spot!
By: Vicki Locey on September 10, 2019
at 4:37 am
Lol. Yep. 😁
By: Author on September 10, 2019
at 6:58 am
Definitely intrigued. Well done.
By: mhsusannematthews on September 10, 2019
at 6:22 am
Thanks Susanne.
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By: Author on September 10, 2019
at 6:57 am
Don’t stop. I want to knooooooow what he is doing.
By: Flossie Benton Rogers on September 10, 2019
at 10:21 pm
Lol. Stay tuned…..
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By: Author on September 11, 2019
at 6:49 am
Love the confrontation. Stink eye — great word choice!! So, what is he? A train robber? Probably not, but up to no good of some kind, no??
By: Jean C. Joachim on September 15, 2019
at 8:08 am
thanks Jean. I love that phrase. Eventually, we will see what he’s up to. I am still unsure myself. LOL
By: Author on September 16, 2019
at 2:28 pm
I love that she automatically jumps to the assumption that he’s a train robber. I can’t wait to learn more about him. Great job!!
By: Tricia on September 16, 2019
at 2:13 pm
thanks. I love leaping to conclusions! Or at least having characters do so! LOL!
By: Author on September 16, 2019
at 2:29 pm